Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Can it be a good or a thing that is bad?
BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Definitely a development that is good gives something for folks to wish to. In addition most begets that are likely revenues for the performers and promoters , that ought to ultimately result in a even more events. This undoubtedly leads to greater monetary and wealth that is cultural a society. Take including the English Premier League (EPL), this entertainment spectacle has had wealth that is considerable cities such as for example Manchester, Liverpool and London. Higher ticket prices result in better wages for football stars, which result in more quality players wanting to play within the EPL, ultimately causing a cons >high net-worth individuals residing in these cities. There has undoubtedly been a positive cycle that is self-fulfilling of and quality, fuelled by increasing prices. Furthermore prices that are high almost certainly mean higher tax revenues for the government, this might be definitely good for society.
P2 – Same, but apply to a event that is cultural ballet – opera.
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What we’re planning to do is look at about 5 or 6 IELTS Task 2 questions.
And together we’re planning to work through what we’re planning to write for each paragraph.
I’m going to be quite quick but i simply want to show you the procedure I use for when I’m writing my essays.
And I also do write a lot of essays ’cause I find out
the more I write, the simpler it gets (logically).
Not to mention being a native speaker, I don’t need to check it.
Although, I shall admit
my spelling isn’t fantastic.
However, I got Microsoft Word and stuff like that for a few associated with the other problems (usually the vowels and stuff).
But anyway, let’s get going.
To begin with, good luck to Shuko and Hamilian.
The two online students that are gonna use the test.
I’ve been working with them trying to get ideas working on the speaking websites for writing essays,
get ideas for essays,
taking care of their grammar,
and I’m pretty certain they’re going to get it done.
So we’ll see. I’ll let you understand how it goes.
But I’m pretty certain they are able to get it done.
They’ve been working quite hard (especially Shuko… she never stop sending me essays).
Let’s get started.
So I’ve decided to take question from about three or four subjects.
Let’s get going.
It is better for students to work before the university study?“Do you think”
“Use reasons and specific examples to support your decision.”
Because of this essay, I decided “Yes, it is advisable.”
For the 1st paragraph I said:
“The student would get working experience,”
“they get contacts,”
“they get on-the-job skills.”
That’s very good collocation to use “on-the-job skills.”
And then to prove my point, an example is given by me and I say,
“Studies through the UK Government show that graduates with work experience are two times as prone to find employment.”
So that it’s quite believable, that example.
And of course, these are just rough ideas however it’s a solid idea.
And I’m going to state “yes” from beginning to the finish.
I’m not likely to write a essay that is discussive there’s no need to.
I agree totally by what the relevant question says.
Then for question 2, yet again “yes.” A second reason.
So I’ll say, “Can you continue the initial argument?”
I’ll say, “It’s better preparation, opportunity to improve social skills, close the gap between academia while the private sector…”
Also more collocations there: “social skills,” and “private sector.”
“It also helps the student to commit…”
“It also helps the student before they agree to a permanent plan.”
So it helps them decide. Then for my example, I said:
“One out of six students will alter their advanced schooling course while at university.”
In the event that you actually go through the presentation on a slideshow or in the video on YouTube,
You’ll see that the notes, they’re not full sentences. It’s just a few bullet points, random ideas, all put together.
And I’ve used the shortened version (I didn’t say “university” I just put “uni”).
‘Cause at this stage, my grammar doesn’t have to be perfect.
The spelling doesn’t need to be perfect.
I’m just getting ideas and building the essay.
In this podcast, we’re just planning to look at paragraph 1 and paragraph 2.
‘Cause introductions and conclusions can be written once you’ve got your ideas that are main the body paragraphs.
… And that is where you pick up most points.
Next question… Also related to education…
“Some people believe that children needs to do organized activities inside their leisure time while some believe that children ought to be liberated to do what they need to accomplish inside their time that is free.
Not the greatest written question there but anyway…
“Which viewpoint do you really agree with?”
“Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.”
Quickly, I’m writing down ideas. I’m going to say:
“There’s lots of benefits in letting your head wonder.”
“Children can express themselves.”
“They are able to find themselves.”
“They can perform whatever they prefer and excel at.”
Like I said, ideas. Ideas. Just getting them down. Maybe I’ll use 2 of the in the body paragraph that is actual.
Then I’ve got an example… or a example that is believable
(I invented this nonetheless it doesn’t matter.)
(I invented this but it’s believable.)
“Recent studies also show 12% of school students dislike physical education, therefore if sports were chosen it be unfair for this minority.”
Yeah? That’s believable. That’s believable. It’s about 12%.
I remember in school, there’s a few that didn’t’ like sports, so it’s believable.
I’m not saying, “99% or all students hate physical exercise” because that will just be insanely inaccurate.
And also, notice the vocabulary I used.
I’ve used the collocations needless to say, “physical education”
but I also used, “dislike” i did son’t say “hate” or “absolutely disgust” because this is certainly very language that is strong.
And this is an academic essay it a little bit so we have to limit.
We can not be so absolute.
Now, my second paragraph focuses on the price and what could be necessary.